When you make a piece of writing but you write about the most disgusting dinner's you have ever had but it has to be something you have had to eat before but when you make it you need to have punctuation and to have and normally you will need to have lots of stuff and make sure you need to have
This is my story so you can read this pieces of writing.
I got home from rugby training. I smelled the worst thing ever. I ask my mum what is that smell and my mum said ”that’s dinner” I ran to the shower and I had a shower. Then the smell got to the whole house, it smelled like the most disgusting dinners ever so I said to my brother “you should be on master chief for the most disgusting dinner! Because that smells is horrible!” OK that needs to have work on your cooking why don’t you ask mum to teach you. Then he said “don’t be such a mean brother you need to work on your rugby ball skills” so I told my mum told my brother to chuck that out. We will just have to order something else like a take away. We might just have to have dominos or pizza hut,Macaus,KFC or Wendy’s.
This is expired food you can not eat but when you look at this expired food you will think that this food is not expired but this is expired food
Hi Oliver here.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said it was expired food because it was interesting.
I just wanna ask how did who ever made that, make it.maybe you could make without expired food.
Hi Oliver
ReplyDeleteMy brother made this for an experiment for his science class his teacher told him to make some food that will look like it is not expired but it is actually expired
-Caleb